April 23rd

April 23^rd

Hello everybody! I´m so excited we are going to see each other again at the meeting we have today!

   Task 1:

   Please, try to read the correction code before the meeting because I´m going to explain to you the way I´m going to correct your writings for you to do the second drafts. Remember to have your folders and pencil cases ready to take down notes

CORRECTION SYMBOLS

Gr	Check the grammar of this sentence.	There was five children.
Sp	This is an incorrect spelling.	It was exellent!
T	Check the tense of this sentence.	Last weekend I spend a day in a yellow submarine.
P	Incorrect/ missing punctuation.	Dear Lucy:
WW	Wrong word being used.	At school, he sits at his table.
WO	Word order is incorrect.	We went up to the sea green.
Prep	Incorrect/ missing preposition.	I ate fish in lunch.
Voc	Look for alternative/ more varied vocabulary.	I went to a nice place and it was a nice experience.
Inc	Incomplete/ word missing.	I wanted play games.
?	I don’t know what you mean/not clear/ I can’t read your handwriting.
Rep	Repetition	Last weekend I went to a yellow submarine and I had a great experience in the yellow submarine.
Exp	Expand your ideas (Give reasons, etc)
Org	This could be better organised.
//	Start new paragraph
Par	You’re using too many/ too few paragraphs.
Con	Insert or change connector	He tried snowboarding. He didn´t like it.

 Task 2:

Remember to watch the video we sent you on Shakespeare because we are also going to to talk about it.       

 Task 3:

       

Finally, I would like you to re- read War With Grandpa  for our meeting on Friday. Chapters 1 to 11. Here you will find the audios again.

         https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OoXIagfKfBYDWvZ88x7bwz4aZiry81K-/view

         https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OoXIagfKfBYDWvZ88x7bwz4aZiry81K-/view

  See you later!! And get ready to sing Happy birthday!!!

  Miss Meli